Monday 11 March 2013

Feedback for Original Print Productions


Here are some of the feedback I have gained from other students concerning my print productions:

Panel 1:



"Too bland, change pic (if possible or change position of title)"
"Too much like a mug shot"
"The background should be more relevant"

Panel 2:



"A bit plain"

Panel 3:



"Too much of a cartoony effect on this panel, doesn't fit in with the rest of the art"

Panel 4:



"change the font to one without stroke / outline"
"visit our website is not needed, just use URL"
"Get rid of inverted commas around the track titles"

Magazine Advert:



"Try and erase the shadow on the magazine ad, if possible"
"Four stars instead of five"
"Erase shadow"
"Filter grainy, lyric stands out"

Saturday 23 February 2013

Final DigiPak and Magazine Advert

Panel 1 (front)


Panel 2 (inside left)


Panel 3 (inside right)


Panel 4 (back)

Magazine Advert